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Karen Armstrong’s History of God.

23-Oct-08

When someone writes a four-hundred page summary of the monotheistic West’s ideas about God, there are a few things a reviewer can’t say. You can’t say that the author left things out; of course, that’s the nature of the project. You can’t say that the treatment of certain things was cursory; of course it will be. You can’t expect to agree with the author’s take on every prophet, saint, mystic, and theologian from the entire tradition.

However, there are certain things that are worth looking for and, if they are absent, worth noting in a review. Outright bigotry, or a pattern of bias, is worth pointing out; serious deficiencies or infantile conceptions need to be addressed. A four-hundred page book about God will not say everything, but it can say a lot, and it is worth little if it is not reliable.

Karen Armstrong’s summary of Judaism’s, Christianity’s, and Islam’s conceptions about God is widely available still more than a decade after it was printed. She is still writing and the book will probably be available for a few decades more. But the book has serious deficiencies. There are enough errors to warrant concern; and the book is for the most part bigoted, designed to uphold a single quasi-religious conception, which is most closely associated with the post-1960s West.

In fact the book is not really a history; that word tends to imply at least some objectivity. But she is really not interested in the varieties of the religious experience. She knows what’s good and what isn’t, and that prejudgement – or prejudice – colors the narration of the history. At the same time, her standards are not consistent – the same action taken by one person is abhorrent in another.

In short, this book is not a dispassionate account of various ideas about the nature of God. Armstrong has a very specific idea of what God is. God is not about rules, not about sacrifice, not about hierarchy – he’s not even that much into peace, love, or justice. He’s not personal. He’s not rational. The best term for him might be “nothing.” He does not exist just as much as he does exist. I will let her confess her own creed:

It should be obvious that the imagination is the chief religious faculty. It has been defined by Jean-Paul Sartre as ability to think of what is not. Human beings are the only animals who have the capacity to envisage something that is not present or something that does not yet exist but which is merely possible. The imagination has thus been the cause of our major achievements in science and technology as well as in art and religion. The idea of God, however it is defined, is perhaps the prime example of an absent reality which, despite its inbuilt problems, has continued to inspire men and women for thousands of years. (233)

Later she castigates philosophers, Jewish, Christian, and Muslim – for not realizing this:

Instead of seeing the idea of God as a symbol of a reality which had no existence in the usual sense of the word and which could only be discovered by the imaginative disciplines of prayer and contemplation, it was increasingly assumed that God was simply a fact of life like any other. (291)

Regardless of whether you agree with Armstrong’s creed or not, it mars her presentation: by polemically getting up on her soapbox at various times in the book, she distracts the reader from any fair contemplation of any other ideas about God. And in fact, her dogmatism seeps into almost everything she says, staining her objectivity.

The phrase she uses to sum up her opinion is that God is “a subjective experience.” He’s not much into religion, but he’s really into spirituality. She agrees with the mystics who make God beyond all things. This presumably relativizes God somewhat, but Armstrong has another God she uses more polemically, the liberal God. The liberal God is all about compassion. He surfaces in her rather dismissive discussion of Luther:

Luther … remained a disturbed, angry and violent man. All the major religious traditions claim that the acid test of any spirituality is the degree to which it has been integrated into daily life. As the Buddha said, after enlightenment one should “return to the marketplace” and practice compassion for all living beings. A sense of peace, serenity, and loving-kindness are the hallmarks of all true religious insight. Luther, however, was a rabid anti-Semite, a misogynist, was convulsed with a loathing and horror of sexuality and believed that all rebellious peasants should be killed. His vision of a wrathful God had filled him with personal rage…. (279)

First of all, it might be wise to question whether all the major religious traditions have the same “acid test,” or whether there can be a legitimate “acid test” for what was only a short time ago defined as a “subjective experience.” But beyond that, there is the deeper irony that Armstrong herself does not seem to live up to her own standards of “true religious insight,” the presence of “peace, serenity, and loving-kindness.” A lack of true religious insight would be a major reason not to bother with the book. The following is at least part of her creed, by which we can measure her:

Jews, Christians, and Muslims who punctiliously attend divine services yet denigrate people who belong to different ethnic and ideological camps deny one of the basic truths of their religion. It is equally inappropriate for people who call themselves Jews, Christians, and Muslims to condone an inequitable social system. The God of historical monotheism demands mercy not sacrifice, compassion rather than decorous liturgy. (392)

Of course we can ask how, precisely, Armstrong knows what “the God of historical monotheism” demands. She elsewhere decries the idea of God as an “alien lawgiver” in the most contemptuous terms (“the image of the divine Tyrant imposing an alien law on his unwilling human servants has to go” (394)), although any God who would demand mercy and an equitable social system would certainly be demanding things that are alien to the natural patterns of life on earth. And there is plenty of evidence to believe that most worshippers of “historical monotheism” have disagreed with her. For the most part they think that God distinguishes between those who follow him and those who do not. Judaism, Christianity, and Islam have all built tiered systems for society, and as far as I know, the Gospel is the only part of this tradition that seems to advocate treating your enemies and your friends equally.

But the “acid test,” by Armstrong’s own standards, is whether or not she lives up to her value of not denigrating people who belong to “different ethnic and ideological camps.” I am not certain that “peace, serenity, and loving-kindness” describe the way she describes the founder of the Order of the Sacred Heart:

A highly neurotic woman, who confessed to a loathing of the very idea of sex, suffered from an eating disorder and indulged in unhealthy masochistic acts to prove her ‘love’ for the Sacred Heart, Marguerite-Marie shows how a religion of the heart alone can go awry. (317)

But rationalist approaches to God do not leave her feeling pacific either: “The God of the philosophers is the product of a now outdated rationalism” (396). This is her take on Nicholas of Cusa’s theo-philosophical speculations:

The mathematical idea of ‘the maximum’ and ‘the minimum’ were apparently opposites but in fact could logically be seen as identical. This ‘coincidence of opposites’ contained the idea of God: the idea of ‘the maximum’ includes everything; it implies notions of unity and necessity which point directly to God. Further, the maximum line was not a triangle, a circle, or a sphere, but all three combined: the unity of opposites was also a Trinity. Yet Nicholas’ clever demonstration has little religious meaning. It seems to reduce the idea of God to a logical conundrum (274).

Her take on Milton is a good example of her method. He gets two whole pages, but is quoted only on the topic of free will. She gives us the passage where Milton has God state that men could not accuse

Thir maker, or thir making, or thir Fate;
As if Predestination over-rul’d
Thir will, dispos’d by absolute Decree
Or high foreknowledge; they themselves decreed
Thir own revolt, not I; if I foreknew,
Foreknowledge had no influence on thir fault,
Which had no less prov’d certain unforeknown…
I formed them free, and free they must remain,
Till they enthrall themselves; I else must change
Thir nature, and revoke the high Decree
Unchangeable, Eternal, which ordaind
Thir freedom; they themselves ordaind thir fall. [sic; 3.113-119; 124-128]

This is her analysis of the passage:

Not only is it difficult to respect this shoddy thinking, but God comes across as callous, self-righteous, and entirely lacking in the compassion that his religion was supposed to inspire. Forcing God to speak and think like one of us in this way shows the inadequacies of such an anthropomorphic and personalistic conception of the divine. There are too many contradictions for such a God to be either coherent or worthy of veneration (309).

This really is the mood of the book: a series of quotations followed by rude dismissiveness. Paradise Lost is not my favorite book, but it is clear enough that Milton localizes the compassion that Armstrong finds so important in God the Son; and one of the results of this is that despite the apparent contradiction between them, both stern adherence to law and compassion end up being divinely ordained, an idea I as a teacher of young students find personally most interesting. Yes, it is important to be compassionate with them, and to forgive their offenses. But it is also important to hold them accountable and demand a strict code of conduct. The parent who allows a child to disregard all rules when crossing the street, for instance, is not a good parent. The teacher who allows error, cruelty, and disrespect in his classroom, all in the name of Christian tolerance and forgiveness (“peace, serenity, and loving-kindness”) similarly does no service to his students. And there are many other instances where we seem to stumble across a natural limitation on the goodness, or at least utility, of compassion. But I fear that if Armstrong feels entitled to treat Milton this way, who she must know is not a “shoddy thinker,” it is not likely she will have much respect for anyone who disagrees with her.

The above passage may serve to explain one major aspect of her beliefs about God: the God of laws, at least in the Christian context, means nothing to her. This makes her partiality to Judaism and Islam all the more curious, but that probably has roots other than doctrinal ones. This makes her a fairly typical 1960s liberal. Ideas such as the notion that giving laws can itself be an act of compassion is simply beyond her. And the interesting notion of a God who hates is utterly unthinkable to her. As indeed it would be to people of her sort. But I think it would be very interesting to have people study, without any finger-wagging, the relationship of hatred and religion. The Armstrong types would quickly say that God and hate have nothing to do with one another, but why does this have to be so? How does God feel about rape, or torturing children, or genocide? Is it possible that he hates them? And if he feels otherwise – either indifference or some kind of pleasure – what does this say about the nature of God? And again, if hatred has no divine origin, then where does it come from? Do animals feel it, or is it specific to humans? If the latter, then is it a natural outgrowth of consciousness? Or an evolutionary asset? If God does not hate, or at least countenances genocide and rape and torture, should we countenance them as well? Would not all of these questions be interesting ones, especially viewed in the light of history? But we are not going to get this kind of consideration from Armstrong.

Armstrong’s views about God also clearly color her ability to be scholarly. Jesus must be purely compassionate, and any deviation from that must be “inauthentic”:

In St. Matthew’s Gospel, Jesus is made to utter violent and rather unedifying [for whom? for her?] diatribes against “the Scribes and the Pharisees,” presenting them as worthless hypocrites. Apart from this being a libelous distortion of the facts and a flagrant breach of the charity that was supposed to characterize his mission, the bitter denunciation of the Pharisees is almost certainly inauthentic. (81)

She claims to have knowledge of “the facts” about “the Pharisees,” although it is unclear precisely what those would be. Apparently the Pharisees were “passionately spiritual Jews” (72). But how can one decide this? Is it not better to say that “other sources do not agree with this,” and leave it at that?

Presumably, there is a reason for this. Armstrong does not want any hint of stridency in Jesus, who must be all about compassion, the “acid-test” of spirituality, so whatever she finds does not fit, must be inauthentic. (It is also worth pointing out that one of the typical modern-liberal responses to a stereotype (like “the Pharisees were hypocrites”) is to argue for the opposite stereotype rather than transcending it entirely.)

She also objects to the idea that Jesus was divine. She decides to fight this argument using Paul, a most curious idea. I believe that Paul can perhaps be accused of deifying Jesus at the expense of Jesus’ manhood; but Armstrong decides to argue the opposite: “As a Jew, Paul did not believe that he [Jesus] had been God incarnate” (86)). One may as well comment here on Armstrong’s stereotypical way of thinking: “Jews do not believe God can be incarnated; Paul is a Jew; therefore…” I imagine a plausible case for this can be made, especially in a short book like this directed at mass-market, religious dilettante-type readers: simply quote the passages where Paul talks about Jesus as a man, but leave out the parts where he talks about Jesus as God. But she seems to do precisely the opposite, whether from guilty conscience or ineptitude I cannot say. So for instance she decides to quote Paul’s letter to the Philippians in order to prove her point:

Who subsisting in the form of God
did not cling to his equality with God
but emptied himself,
to assume the condition of a slave,
and he became as men are.

She then gives this passage the following astonishing analysis:

Paul was too Jewish to accept the idea of Christ existing as a second divine being beside YHWH from all eternity. The hymn shows that after his exaltation he is still distinct from and inferior to God…. (88-89)

How is it possible that she could have used the passage where Paul talks about Jesus’ “equality with God” in order to prove that he was “inferior to God”?

It is obvious enough that she has an axe to grind here, and it is important to her that the Incarnation, which admittedly does not square with her own theology, not have old roots. But why did she decide to fight this battle using Paul? Later, she admits that Paul and John ascribe to Jesus “some kind of preexistent life,” but that they were merely

indicating that Jesus had transcended temporal and individual modes of existence. Because the ‘power’ and ‘wisdom’ that he represented were activities that derived from God, he had in some way expressed what was there from the beginning.

The important term is “in some way.” Armstrong is not going to say how. It is one thing for her to say that she is unsure how many early Christians really believed that Jesus was one person of a Trinity; this sounds fair enough. She could also say that many of the sources which denied Christ any divinity have probably been destroyed. But what she presents is mere intellectual sloppiness attempting to back up her own dogmatic utterances. Think about how many vague words are in her argumentation above: “indicating”, “transcended”, “temporal and individual modes of existence,” “represented”, “activities”, “derived”, “expressed”. Despite the polysyllabic words, it would be hard to be more vague or vapid than this. And of course, I will say, that it is acceptable to be intellectually vapid. But it is not acceptable to proclaim something in the face of a couple of millennia of both impassioned and dispassionate analysis and then retreat behind a mass of verbiage. I repeat how strange I find it that she tries to make this argument using these texts. She also mentions, strangely, that Paul talks repeatedly about all Christians as being “in Christ” and part of his body. These appear to be divine qualities. Perhaps she should be applauded for offering the reader precisely the texts which make her arguments seem untenable. And there are many other places, not mentioned in Armstrong’s text, where Paul clearly seems to deify Jesus. In fact, she herself specifically associates the Trinity with Christianity and she repeats the old chestnut that Paul was the true founder of the Christian religion. The result is mere opinionated incoherence.

There are plenty of other dogmatic pronouncements which get no argumentation at all. So she claims knowledge of what Jesus meant by “faith”: “By faith, of course, he did not mean adopting the correct theology but cultivating an inner attitude of surrender and openness to God” (82). Of course. So much for that problem. She knows the meaning of the book of Job: “The author of Job is not denying the right to question, however, but suggesting that the intellect alone is not equipped to deal with these imponderable matters.” Muhammed was a social reformer with a program: “Muhammed was convinced that unless the Quraysh learned to put another transcendent value at the center of their lives and overcome their egotism and greed, his tribe would tear itself apart morally and politically in internecine strife” (133). Is this a legitimate reason for starting a new religion? I suppose it does not matter, because it is merely Armstrong’s assertion, and nothing – no source, none of the hadith, nothing – suggests that this was Muhammed’s motivation.

In fact, Armstrong seems to suffer from the typical problems attendant in the crisis (some might say collapse) of Western scholarly methods and the assault on the possibility of objectivity. While objectivity might only be approached asymptotically, it still traditionally is one of the goals of the scholar. Armstrong, however, is a child of the Orwellian age of propaganda. One of the crucial scholarly distinctions is deed (which is observable and hence falsifiable to some extent) and motive, which is utterly invisible and can only be surmised. This distinction, admittedly, is rarely talked about by older scholars because it probably was imbibed by osmosis from their Latin: Latin distinguishes between clauses which merely state observable facts (in the indicative) from those which ascribe motivation, purpose, or causal relationships (subjunctive). Armstrong has none of this scholarly equipment (along with many other writers today) and treats motives as facts. We may as well add that she uses Latin and Greek for her argumentation from time to time, but knows nothing about them and is the prey of any bad scholarship which agrees with her worldview. She wants to make the faith of the primitive Christians an emotional, not an intellectual affair, so she says the following:

When they recited their “creeds,” they were not assenting to a set of propositions. The word credere, for example, seems to have derived from cor dare: to give one’s heart. When they said “credo!” (or pisteuo in Greek), this implied an emotional rather than an intellectual position. (93)

This is simply false. Credere’s origins, like those of most words, are very obscure (though let it be said that none of the eytmological dictionaries second Armstrong’s claim), but there are analogues in both Sanskrit and Irish, meaning that it is an ancient word whose etymology would have been no more important to the Romans than the etymology of “believe” is to us. Its social context, however, would have been important to the Romans: but it did not have the emotional connotation Armstrong gives it. It can mean trust, but especially trust in terms of a person’s honesty and their financial solvency; this is where the word credit comes from. It also can mean a person’s opinions – it often is used to describe a person’s feelings for certain propositions (and so it often introduces what is called an indirect statement). And in Christian terms, it is, in fact, used for creeds, that is to say, the social repetition of a set of religious postulates. And the Greek pisteuo certainly does not have anything to do with giving of one’s heart and means “I am convinced.” It is decidedly intellectual, and was considered the goal of oratory – to gain the other person’s pistis, or conviction that you were right and your opponent (particularly in court) was wrong. Of course, later mystics can make as much hay with these words as they want. But there is ample evidence to convince me that Armstrong is projecting her own desires onto the meanings of these words.

This accounts for her description of the Council of Nicaea:

When the bishops gathered at Nicaea on May 20, 325 to resolve the crisis, very few would have shared Athanasius’view of Christ [what does the ‘would have shared’ here mean? Did they or didn’t they? Does she know or not?]. Most held a position midway between Athanasius and Arius. Nevertheless, Athanasius managed to impose his theology on the delegates and, with the emperor breathing down their necks, only Arius and two of his companions refused to sign his Creed. (111)

This is, needless to say, a highly polemical account. She begins by asserting what the rest of the bishops believed. Then she uses the term “impose.” Could “convince” be the word she means? Athanasius had no power to compel anyone, and it has never been certain that Constantine really had a preference (though our sources do indicate that he wanted an answer quickly). The evidence of the Council seems to indicate that substantial agreement was achieved, and that it endured: this is still the Creed used by all the Catholic Churches, both East and West, and many of the Protestant ones as well. But Armstrong disapproves of the conciliar process (which for the most part is what the West now calls “democracy”: a set of representatives reach as much consensus as possible, vote, and the result is used as the standard for the community subsequently): it is an imposition on the subjective God, and so she needs to make it seem as unattractive as possible.

We might just say that Armstrong is an judgemental old curmudgeon who found none of the inherited forms of religion appropriate to her, and that her book is a kind of compendium of all of her biases and prejudices about them. But it does go beyond that. She couples this negativity with an interesting praise of non-Western cultures. In this case, Islam gets the most prefential treatment (Armstrong has also written a book called Muhammed: A Prophet for Our Time, which I mention just to dispel the idea that one is to look for objectivity from her on this issue). Her double standard is quite remarkable, and presumably it must be referred to the typical pattern of her generation, which found the West the cause of all bad things in the world.

Epictetus said that every phenomenon has two handles, a good handle and a bad handle, and one may take it by either one. Everything that has to do with Islam she grabs by the good handle. One might think that she would not be a fan of the tribal system of vendettas and personal strength which preceded Muhammed and to some extent survived him in Arabia, but she can find some good in it:

Brutal as it undoubtedly was, however, muruwah had many strengths. It encouraged a deep and strong egalitarianism and an indifference to material goods which, again, was probably essential in a region where there were not enough of the essentials to go round… (134)

This kind of positive thinking might be pleasing if it were applied equally. But it is not. And it comes with a very curious pattern, that of concluding her thoughts with a sidewise look at Christianity. For her, Islam is merely a stick to beat the West with.

The Koran constantly stresses the need for intelligence in deciphering the “signs” or “messages” of God. Muslims are not to abdicate their reason but to look at the world attentively and with curiosity. It was this attitude that later enabled Muslims to build a fine tradition of natural science, which has never been seen as such a danger to religion as in Christianity. (143)

What about the West? Does it not have a “fine tradition of natural science”? If it does, then how did it occur? Is it really true that “Christianity” – including people like Newton, whose religious views she dismisses fairly abruptly as insufficient (“Newton had clearly no understanding of the role of mystery in the religious life” (305)) – can be discussed as a block like this? But this is part of Armstrong’s method: stereotypes along religious lines are the lifeblood of the narrative. The Muslims are pro-science. Therefore she does not discuss Islamic anti-science proverbs like “there is no knowledge save of the Koran.” The story about the Islamic rationale for burning the library of Alexandria (“If these books agree with the Koran, they are superfluous; if they do not, they are lies”) is also left out. All this is fine; this anti-intellectualism is only a strain in Islam, as it is only a strain in the West. But to say that Islam’s tolerance of reason leads to scientific flourishing, while Christianity’s suspicion has been a stumbling block to intellectual progress, does not seem to explain the facts of history well. She later reports a claim by a Muslim scholar that Muhammad was Plato’s philosopher-king, and that Islam and reason have always been uniquely entwined:

… in the Koran reason and religion had marched hand in hand for the first time in history. Before the career of the Prophet, revelation had been attended by miracles, legends, and irrational rhetoric, but the Koran had not resorted to these more primitive methods. It had “advanced proof and demonstration, expounded the views of the disbelievers and inveighed against them rationally.” (364)

Yet elsewhere she notes that we should not judge the Koran by any rational standards, and it cannot be translated, but instead we need to hear it in Arabic in order to be swept away by the power of its words.

Muslims say that when they hear the Koran chanted in the mosque they feel enveloped in a divine dimension of sound, rather as Muhammad was enveloped in the embrace of Gabriel on Mount Hira… It is not a book to be read simply to acquire information… By approaching the Koran in the right way, Muslims claim that they do experience a sense of transcendence, of an ultimate reality and power that lie behind the transient and fleeting phenomena of the mundane world. Reading the Koran is therefore a spiritual discipline, which Christians may find difficult to understand because they do not have a sacred language, in the way the Hebrew, Sanskrit, and Arabic are sacred to Jews, Hindus, and Muslims. (144)

First of all, the Christian churches have always had sacred languages in precisely the same way, and those languages formed the basic fault lines of division for those churches. The Greeks have the language of the Gospels, which they preserve unchanged in their liturgy; the Russians have Old Slavonic; the Syrian Christians claim they have the actual language of Jesus, Aramaic. Look at the façade of any church in Rome if you don’t believe that the “Latin West” (a term even Armstrong uses) has no sacral language. This is another phenomenon of religion which might have been discussed with an eye to its cross-cultural applicability. But the main point here is the equation of Islam’s methods with reason. The untranslatability of the Koran cannot be squared with rationality. Newton’s laws are not more valid in Latin than they are in Arabic. The fact that readers find the Koran “boring and repetitive,” as she claims, in translation, is a sign that its appeal is not to reason.

There are many more examples of these block stereotypes, in which the Christian West is always the religion that lags behind. When she deals with mystics, she says,

The West did not develop an esoteric tradition but adhered to the kerygmatic interpretation of religion, which was supposed to be the same for everybody. Instead of allowing their so-called deviants to go private, Western Christians simply persecuted them and attempted to wipe out nonconformists. In Islamdom, esoteric thinkers usually died in their beds. (176)

These are stereotypes at best, but lies might better describe them. The West has no esoteric tradition? None at all? Armstrong herself talks about (some) of the mystics of the West. And certainly persecution has not been the West’s only response to nonconformity. And indeed, Islam has been guilty of persecution as well. One of Muhammed’s dying wishes, our sources tell us, was “expel all the idolaters from Arabia.” The entire ninth sura of the Koran, the Sura of the Sword, might be called “the Sura of religious persecution.” Of course none of these things are mentioned. But at least she does confess that the two muslim mystics she spends the most time on, al-Hallaj and Suhrawardi, were both executed by muslim religious authorities. Of course, in these instances she does not harp on their persecuters but on them: “Al-Hallaj refused to recant when accused of blasphemy and died a saintly death” (228). “Like al-Hallaj, however, Suhrawardi was also put to death by the ulema in Aleppo in 1191, for reasons that remain obscure” (230). One gets the impression that the crucifixion al-Hallaj endured, had it been in the West, would have been called by Armstrong something more graphic than a “saintly death.” And curiously, she declares that the mystic interpretation of Islam known as Sufism, which is so appealing to the West, was “normative in many parts of the Islamic empire” (230). It would be interesting to see the proof for this. Usually “esoteric” traditions are the opposite of “normative.” And usually people are not executed by societies for their normative ideas.

A fine study in contrasts revealing her bias is her account of Josiah returning to Jerusalem. The Biblical account describes him “looking on as the altars of the Baals were demolished,” and he “smashed the sacred poles and the carved and cast idols.” She says:

We are far from the Buddha’s serene acceptance of the deities he believed he had outgrown. This wholesale destruction springs from a hatred that is rooted in buried anxiety and fear. (54)

All this is well. She is entitled to her pop-psychology understanding of Josiah, though it is not very helpful, I think. But what about Muhammed’s return to the Kaaba and his “cleansing” of the Kaaba? She does not describe that moment, but merely approves of Muhammed’s noble unwillingness to compromise:

The sources show that Muhammed absolutely refused to compromise with the Quraysh on the matter of idolatry. He was a pragmatic man and would readily make a concession on what he deemed to be inessential, but whenever the Quraysh asked him to accept a monolatrous solution, allowing them to worship their ancestral gods while he and his Muslims worshipped al-Lah alone, Muhammed vehemently rejected the proposal. As the Koran has it: “I do not worship that which you worship, and neither do you worship that which I worship… Unto you your moral law, and, unto me, mine!” The Muslims would surrender to God alone and would not succumb to the false objects of worship – be they deities or values – espoused by the Quraysh. (149)

This all sounds lovely. But why is it not basically the same viewpoint as Josiah? How was Josiah not nobly refusing to succumb to “false objects of worship” but merely acting from “a hatred that is rooted in buried anxiety and fear”? What information does Armstrong have about these men that we lack, that she can distinguish between them? And it really must be noted how Armstrong uses a most curious quotation. She justifies Muhammad’s refusal to permit any tolerance with a line about tolerance: “Unto you your moral law, and unto me mine.” But that is what his opponents were proposing. This is the viewpoint he denies; his moral law was to be the moral law. She is utterly confusing tolerance and intolerance. In fact, it closely resembles Armstrong’s psychic makeup, and may help explain why she finds Muhammad so attractive.

She seems to be filled with rage at the West, to which she constantly refers in derogatory terms. She can barely praise any non-Western religious idea without instantly referring back to its inferior Western counterpart. When she praises the esoteric traditions of the East, she simply has to give a glance back West: “The Christians of Europe were not able to produce such a positive spirituality” (271). “In the West Christians were slower to develop a mystical tradition” (252). What is the purpose of this comparison except to reveal its bias? It is the method of the old propagandists. A racist writer might replace “Christians” with “the Africans” or “the Semites.” What are these broad stereotypes good for? In Armstrong’s hands, they can be so crude as to be comic:

The intolerance that many people condemn in Islam today does not always spring from a rival vision of God but from quite another source: Muslims are intolerant of injustice, whether this is committed by rulers of their own – like Shah Muhammad Reza Pahlavi or Iran – or by the powerful Western countries. (152)

Well, I suppose it’s good to get that cleared up (I was wondering where that intolerance in Islam comes from), although perhaps Armstrong should castigate Muhammad more for so deeply implanting this hatred of injustice in the Muslims. If they dislike injustice, how are they ever going to find “peace and serenity,” then, with neighbors like Westerners?

There are other great moments. This is her description of the high middle ages:

At the same time as European Christians were bent on the destruction of Islam in the Near East, Muslims in Spain were helping the West to build up its own civilization. (205)

But she does mention elsewhere that the tradition of Muslim philosophy was dependent on Plato and Aristotle, although almost none of the great Muslim philosophers learned Greek: instead they relied on Christians to translate for them. Was this not helping them “build up” their civilization? And while the Muslims in Spain were doing this, what were the Muslims in Asia Minor doing? Was it Muslims who destroyed Byzantine civilization, or was it someone else? What kind of inspiring example can we get from Turkish policies in the Balkans? And we really must be on guard against this “golden age of Islamic Spain” myth, wherever it came from. No one thinks that this civilization had anything even approaching equal rights, and in terms of cultural flourishing, no one really would deny that Spain’s golden age of cultural importance was inaugurated, not ended, by the reconquista: it was during the 16th century that Spanish architecture, painting, and literature rose to greatness, and Spain’s language became one of the world’s major tongues.

Of course this kind of arguing can go on forever. The important point is that Armstrong insists on localizing all that is good in the East, while the West is the source of everything evil. Luther is a misogynist and anti-Semite, but Muhammad is on a quest to build a just society (events such as the elimination of the Jewish population in Medina via a massacre which is attested in all the old sources about Muhammad, religiously sanctioned cultural practices such as polygamy or reduced legal rights of women, or verses in the Koran which call into question Armstrong’s theses, are never discussed). She praises Islam’s tolerance for and interest in Hinduism, which is at best a debatable thesis. She then praises Mir Abu al-Qasim Findiriski, who

… spent a good deal of time in India studying Hinduism and Yoga. It would be difficult to imagine a Roman Catholic expert on Thomas Aquinas at this time showing a similar enthusiasm for a religion that was not even in the Abrahamic tradition. (263)

But al-Qasim died in the seventeenth century, after Jesuits, trained very well in Aquinas, had explored, described, catalogued, and occasionally (and to some scandalously) cooperated with non-Abrahamic faiths all over the world. The stories of the Jesuits experimenting with ancestor-worship Catholicism in China are famous. Are there counter-examples, of less tolerant Jesuits and Christians? Of course. But these examples sufficiently refute her rhetoric. What is more, no Roman Catholic expert on Aquinas would have been without years of study of Plato, Aristotle, and the Roman poets such as Vergil and Ovid, all of whom were from a religion not in the Abrahamic tradition.

She also claims that holy war is a unique characteristic of the West:

the crusading religion of Western Christendom had separated it from the other monotheistic traditions…. the Christianity of the Angles, the Saxons, and the Franks was rudimentary. They were aggressive and martial and they wanted an aggressive religion. (196-7)

If such analysis were extended impartially to Islam, might that not explain some of the history of the past millennium and a half? So her analysis about the misogyny of St. Augustine:

Western Christianity never fully recovered from this neurotic misogyny, which can still be seen in the unbalanced reaction to the very notion of the ordination of women. While Eastern women shared the burden of inferiority carried by all women of the Oikumene at this time, their sisters in the West carried the additional stigma of a loathsome and sinful sexuality which caused them to be ostracized in hatred and fear. (124-5)

As far as I can tell, the ordination of women is a Western invention. How did that happen, since the West has not recovered from its neurotic misogyny? I cannot find it in the non-Western monotheistic traditions at all. In Islam, women are not even allowed to worship in the main part of the mosques, but are “ostracized” in the back (I will not attempt to psychologically determine whether it is “in hatred or fear” or not). Does it not make more sense to place the relations between men and women in a much larger context? Surely it cannot be the case that St. Augustine caused the stigmatization of women.

In the end, Armstrong’s book is a polemically inspired screed which selectively applies its chosen criteria and ignores or distorts facts as seems appropriate in order to achieve its polemical objectives. Its main value is as a specimen for study of the propaganda of a certain modern liberal viewpoint. It is also an interesting document for the bookselling industry, which for the most part relies on this bourgeois liberal bookbuyer. Armstrong has been called upon by this industry to refashion man’s entire religious tradition in her own image, a calling she has been most willing to accept.

Most striking about her viewpoint is its combination of a creed of tolerance with intolerance in spirit and practice. This generates a good deal of spiritual tension, which perhaps helps explain the bilious spirit of the book. And it is not possible for her to be completely unaware of this problem in herself. This may help explain the longing for a more quietistic religion: one where peace and serenity and loving-kindness actually prevailed in her heart. But lacking that in herself, she feels that she can blame her spiritual ancestors for it: the Western spiritual tradition is to blame. This may be another one of the reasons that she admires Islam: it has long been in a hostile relationship with the same West Armstrong herself blames for her unhappiness. She then makes an idol of it (and the Indian traditions as well), and puts in their spiritual basket all the qualities she feels she needs in order to be whole again.

This is one of Armstrong’s key prejudicial criteria in judging religions. A good religion will be “healthy,” and a bad one will be “unhealthy.” I am interested in this idea myself, but I don’t imagine that people who think otherwise – who believe that perhaps one may derive religious insight from sickness, for instance (I myself have noticed how much more compassion I feel for people after an illness of my own) – are necessarily wrong. But healthiness resurfaces again and again in the narrative:

The new born-again Christianity that was beginning to appear in the West during the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries was frequently unhealthy and characterized by violent and sometimes dangerous emotions and reversals. (323)

This could have been a reaction to the repressive Puritan ethic, with its unhealthy concentration on the sinfulness of mankind. (322)

Contrast this with Dostoevsky’s fascinating ideas about God, from Crime and Punishment:

“What is that they usually say?” Svidrigailov muttered as if to himself, turning aside and inclining his head slightly. “They say, ‘You’re sick, and therefore what you imagine is all just nonexistent raving.’ But there’s no strict logic here. I agree that ghosts come only to sick people; but that only proves that ghosts cannot appear to anyone but sick people, not that they themselves do not exist.”

“Of course they don’t!” Raskolnikov insisted irritably.

“No? You think not?” Svidrigailov went on, slowly raising his eyes to him. “And what if one reasons like this (come, help me now): ‘Ghosts are, so to speak, bits and pieces of other worlds, their beginnings. The healthy man, naturally, has no call to see them, because the healthy man is the most earthly of men, and therefore he ought to live according to life here, for the sake of completeness and order. Well, but as soon as a man gets sick, as soon as the normal earthly order of his organism is disrupted, the possibility of another world at once begins to make itself known, and the sicker one is, the greater his contact with this other world, so that when a man dies altogether, he goes to the other world directly.’ I’ve been reasoning it out for a long time. If one believes in a future life, one can believe in this reasoning.” (Pevear & Volokhonsky translation, p. 289)

But Armstrong is absolutely unable to approach such a question openmindedly. Health is one of her foreordained goals. What health means in the face of death (which curiously and significantly makes almost no appearance in this book; usually death does not exist in the liberal mind), or what it means to a person who might be by nature chronically and seriously unhealthy, is not discussed: it is simply one of the values of life. The idea that religious insight is sometimes a compensation for lack of health – which is always especially interesting when one considers the role of epilepsy in religious history (Muhammad being one of the more famous epileptics) – is not the kind of idea which would make an appearance in this book. One way or another, the relations between religion and health might be a good topic of dispassionate discussion in a “history of God,” but it does not appear in this one.

I will close with one of her statements of her ideal:

Instead of making God a symbol to challenge our prejudice and force us to contemplate our own shortcomings, it can be used to endorse our egotistic hatred and make it absolute. It makes God behave exactly like us, as though he were simply another human being. Such a God is likely to be more attractive and popular than the God of Amos and Isaiah, who demands ruthless self-criticism. (55)

Is this not her own method?

P.S.  I will close this with a selection of quotations from the book. The first ones do not require much comment. Later I go into more detail.

“The Imitation of Christ, with its rather dour, gloomy religiosity, became one of the most popular of all Western spiritual classics” (272).

“Enthusiasm for relics and holy places also distracted Western Christians from the one thing necessary.  People seemed to be concentrating on anything but God” (273).

“Puritans based their religious experience on Calvin and clearly found God a struggle: he did not seem to imbue them with either happiness or compassion” (283).

“The continuing popularity of the Pensees shows that Pascal’s darker spirituality and his hidden God appealed to something vital in the Western religious consciousness” (298).

“Western theology had tended to overemphasize the importance of rationality ever since Thomas Aquinas, a tendency which had increased since the Reformation” (350).

“Europeans … often displayed a superb ignorance of world history.” The ignorance of Muslims, however, is completely justifiable:

If Muslims were underwhelmed by the Western Renaissance, this did not necessarily reveal an irredeemable cultural inadequacy. Muslims were, not surprisingly, more concerned with their own not inconsiderable cultural achievements during the fifteenth century. (259)

“History shows that it is impossible to reconcile the so-called goodness of God with his omnipotence. Because it lacks coherence, the idea of God is bound to disintegrate” (344).

She never mentions free will as a response to this problem.

“Satan … was increasingly represented as a vast animal with a priapic sexual appetite and huge genitals” (275).

I have never seen such a representation, in all of European painting. Such may well exist, but is this the traditional European image of Satan?

“In the New Testament, the Pharisees are depicted as whited sepulchres and blatant hypocrites. This is due to the distortions of first-century polemic. The Pharisees were passionately spiritual Jews” (72).

All of them? how do we know this? from the other side of the polemic?

“Western Christians have been particularly prone to the flattering belief that they are God’s elect” (55).

“Particularly” in comparison with whom? The Jews? The Muslims? Armstrong herself confesses that the Islamic world has struggled in the past centuries particularly because it is a

religion of success. The Koran taught that a society which lived according to God’s will (implementing justic, equality, and fair distribution of wealth) could not fail. Muslim history had seemed to confirm this. Unlike Christ, Muhammed had not been an apparent failure but a dazzling success. (366)

She sums this up by saying that because of Islam’s success, “the ummah [that is to say, the muslim world, Islamdom] had acquired an almost sacramental importance and had disclosed the presence of God.” In other words, muslims were God’s special people whose existence proved God’s existence. So why then are Western Christians the ones who are so prone to this belief?

Sometimes Armstrong decides to waste words in the most bizarre and condescending ways, as when she explains the meaning of “something”:

Always concerned with accuracy of expression, Wordsworth would only call it [the Spirit he felt in nature] ‘something,’ a word which is often used as a substitute for exact definition. (348-349)

If this is what happens to a pop-culture ‘expert,’ someone who has been called by the publishing industry to be the mirror to their target audience – that they feel called upon to give their own brilliant definitions of words that everyone knows the meaning of – then heaven defend good people everywhere from becoming pop-culture experts.

She is also willing to interpret the significance of doctrines without either analysis or context. She declares that

Christians shared the Gnostic view of the world as inherently fragile and imperfect, separated from God by a vast chasm. The new doctrine of creation ex nihilo emphasized this view of the cosmos as quintessentially frail and utterly dependent on God for being and life. (108)

In fact most Gnostics did not believe in creation by God at all: the world was created by an evil lesser deity known as the demiurge. Matter itself was therefore a prison for spirit, and the world inherently evil. The orthodox responded with the idea of creation ex nihilo and by God, indicating that all things are good because they come directly from God. If Armstrong were to look at the sources, she would find that of the Christian philosophers who support ex nihilo creation all maintain that the world, therefore, must be good. In what way would believing that matter was not made by God close the “vast chasm” separating us from God?

She is also incredibly contrarian. It is clear that she disapproves of celibacy, and considers it unhealthy and extreme. Yet she defends Origen, a second century Christian who castrated himself (castration has been regarded by the orthodox as extreme and unhealthy):

Castration was quite a common operation in late antiquity; Origen did not rush at himself with a knife, nor was his decision inspired by the kind of neurotic loathing of sexuality that would characterize some Western theologians, such as St. Jerome. (101)

What is this supposed to be? A defense of autocastration?

She also (having been there, I suppose) knows all about “Church services” for the early Christians:

Church services were noisy, charismatic affairs, quite different from a tasteful evensong today at the parish church. (87)

So she dislikes tasteful evensongs and decorous liturgies (if they are Western), but I must note, she also dislikes American-style charismatic churches. Oh well. Not everyone can have the proper subjective experience.

The idea of a personal God seems increasingly unacceptable at the present time for all kinds of reasons: moral, intellectual, scientific, and spiritual. (396)

The God of the philosophers is the product of a now outdated rationalism… (396)

In the United States, we have seen that ninety-nine percent of the population claim to believe in God, yet the prevalence of fundamentalism, apocalypticism, and “instant” charismatic forms of religiosity in America is not reassuring. (398)

This is a shame, because from time to time it is clear in life that people do get a tremendous amount of satisfaction from these lawgiving Gods, personal Gods, first-cause type Gods, and Bible-beating Gods. Thomas Paine used to say that we should not make laws abridging religious freedom not because governments do not have the right to interfere with human affairs but because they do not have the right to interfere with God’s right to seek worship from human beings as he sees fit; and that God has apparently been pleased to make the manners of religion multifarious, for his own good pleasure. But for Armstrong this is not permissible. She never lapses into rhapsodes about the feelings Augustine had of God when he began to write, or Cromwell had when in the field, or Sibelius playing his violin alone in the forest. In fact she is not very appreciative at all – when you put the book down, you have a rather dour view of our religious past (this is of course part of the liberal outlook: as we know, pleasure came into the world with the arrival of the Beatles, but before that everyone was miserable). But then you think again: people rolling in the aisles of their churches in Alabama, or Thomas Tallis’ forty-part religious motets, or Bernini’s St. Theresa, or Beshr the Barefoot in bliss in the streets of Baghdad, or the saying of Haydn, when asked why his religious music was so jolly: “Because when I think of our dear God I just get undescribably happy.” They say that when Goethe heard this story, his eyes welled up with emotion. But Armstrong is not a fan of whatever you might call this – the God of the philosophers or the personal God – indeed she is not a fan of anything but herself.  Imprinted on the inside of her skull, and implicit in every sentence she writes, is the dictum L’infer, c’est les autres.

Reason concerning the Republican party.

23-Oct-08

This doesn’t sum up my anger at what has become the party of government of the dumb, by the dumb, and for the rich, but it does offer reasoned, moderate analysis of why this version of the Republican party must be publicly and massively repudiated:

http://www.reason.com/news/show/129599.html

What if Hillary were the nominee?

17-Oct-08

       Back in January, I said that if Barack Obama won the Democratic primary, he would be the next president of the United States; and if Hillary Clinton won the primary, the Republican candidate would be the next president.  John McCain’s campaign (which appears to be imploding) combined with economic uncertainty and real widespread dissatisfaction with the Republican party’s governance of this country all seem to indicate that any Democrat could have beaten any Republican this year.  But I still don’t think this is so.  If Hillary Clinton had won, we would be looking at an entirely different campaign.  And perhaps a McCain presidency.
       If McCain were running against Clinton, he would have avoided his single greatest mistake: the selection of Sarah Palin as his running mate.  He chose her to pick up dissatisfied women voters – voters he would have known he was going to lose if Clinton was the nominee.  Instead his plan would have been to dominate among male voters, with a campaign based on national security, the war in Iraq, and fiscal responsibility.  In other words, he would have played to his strengths.  Instead he is trying to run on the “maverick” card – trying to convince the country that he is a “breath of fresh air” and an outsider – one who just happens to be 72, with almost thirty years of his life spent in Washington.  And one who chose a neo-Republican hack, i.e. an political-evangelical Christian, as the person he would want to govern in his place if need be.
       Against Clinton McCain would open up another major line of attack on Clinton: that she is too partisan, too liberal, and would not be able to govern from the middle.  Unlike the attacks on Obama that he is an extremist liberal, these attacks would in some sense be true.  (See Clinton’s book for a glimpse at how she dehumanizes her opponents.)  McCain could promise a kind of post-partisan presidency, using Democrat/Independent Lieberman and others to make this point.  This would play very well against Clinton (Obama seems to be able to neutralize it because he lacks partisan bile).
       Since Clinton was equally a supporter of the Iraq war, this would become a McCain issue, because more people would trust him to try to win the war.  In general, he would be seen as more reliable on foreign policy than she is.
       What about the economy?  It’s true that there’s no way McCain could win as a Bush Republican on economic issues.  He would have to run as a moderate on this issue (which he has not done at all, running as a tax-cutting trickle-downer).  But this might very well have been the campaign plan against Clinton – tack to the middle.  And again, this would have played to McCain’s strengths.  He hasn’t always been a Bushie.  He hasn’t always pandered to his party.  This seems to have been his gameplan to deal with the unknown Obama: energize the base, let racism and anti-big-government sentiment do the rest. 
And maybe against another candidate this would have worked.  What McCain never saw coming – and the last reason he might have beaten Hillary – is that Obama brings with him a whole new set of voters, a youth movement that will turn out for him in a way they never would have for any other candidate.  Turnout this year will be huge, in a way that it would not have been for a McCain – Clinton contest.  Clinton v. McCain would not seem like the kind of apocalyptic/messianic contest that Obama v. McCain is.  McCain would have had a much better chance with a smaller electorate.  But as it is, it looks like the Democrats will indeed return to the White House.

Hillary Clinton’s Living History

17-Oct-08

       The plan which I conceived, of reading the books ascribed to the major remaining presidential candidates (John McCain, Barack Obama, and Hillary Rodham Clinton), may easily be considered foolish.  It is not at all clear that anyone with any intellectual self-respect should read books like this.  They seem to sell well enough (Clinton and Obama each received seven-figure sums for their books), but I have always had the impression that the readers’ profile for these press releases is among the mentally servile, bovine worshippers of those who fill the primate positions of leadership in our society.  The readers would be the same as the ones who obsess over royal families; but lacking royal families, we have political parties and party leaders.
       There is nothing in Living History, the Hillary Rodham Clinton memoir, to disabuse an intelligent reader of this estimate.  There probably was very little intellectual effort put into its production; and the insights which can be drawn from reading it are about the same as the insights that can be drawn from observing other pop-culture phenomena.  Reading it is not the communion of minds that we seek in literature.  But it is an artifact of our culture, and though not a terribly attractive one, one can learn something about American politics, and about Hillary Clinton; if not the person, then at least the politician and projected public persona.
 Of course, ascribing the book to Clinton is probably like taking at face value the literary claims of several of the White House pets.  In the acknowledgements she acknowledges that Lissa Muscatine was “responsible for many of the words in my speeches as First Lady and in this book,” and there are so many other people given credit for work on the book that it has to be considered a committee production.  Nor does it have the feel of a written book: it does not have the reflectiveness and precision of writing.  Much of it is probably transcribed interview.  And almost all of it stinks of Orwellian twentieth-century politics.  There is a great deal of preaching and a lot of hot air.
       That said, Hillary Clinton is considered intelligent by most estimates, and both the backdrop of her life and the characters on its stage are interesting.  Within the confines of the book, she travels around most of the world and meets such people as Nelson Mandela, Tony Blair, George H.W. Bush, Newt Gingrich, and Benazir Bhutto, among many many others.  The book does not have to be very well put-together to be at least somewhat interesting.
       But one of the first things that is striking about the book is its utter lack of sophistication.  People and places are described with the depth and insight of a tourist brochure.  This is most striking when she describe people.  They may as well be described as “walk-ons,” cameos to her life.  Her is her account of Elie Wiesel, a person of some depth and with much potential for development:
          The most eloquent messenger of this viewpoint [that the U.S. should
          intervene in Bosnia] was Elie Wiesel, who delivered an impassioned
          speech about Bosnia at the museum dedication.   Wiesel, a Nazi death
          camp survivor and winner of the Nobel Peace Prize, turned to Bill
          and said: “Mr. President… I have been in the former Yugoslavia…. I
          cannot sleep since what I have seen.  As a Jew I am saying that.  We
          must do something to stop the bloodshed in that country.”  I had read
          Night, Wiesel’s chilling account of his experiences in Auschwitz and
          Buchenwald, the death camps in Poland and Germany.  I admired his
          writing and dedication to human rights, and since that day, he and his
          wife, Marion, have been friends. (169)

This is the template for the way Clinton treats famous people.  She always mentions their most famous achievement, with which she is always familiar (she had read Night, though not any of his other books).  Whenever there is a proper emotion, she adds an adjective to convey that she has the proper emotional response (“chilling”).  She expresses her admiration for multiple qualities (writing, human rights), and in the end, they become her friends.  The superficiality of the discourse is occasionally painful:

          I was looking forward to visiting Japan again.  I had been there during
          Bill’s governorship, and I remember standing outside the gates and
          gazing at the beautiful Imperial Palace grounds.  This time we would
          attend a formal dinner on the inside, hosted by the Emperor and
          Empress.  Gentle, artistic, and intelligent, this engaging couple embody
          the grace of their nation’s art as well as the serenity of the peaceful
          gardens I finally visited while at the Palace. (175)

          Hosni and Suzanne Mubarak are an impressive couple. (252)

          That night we attended a performance at the famous Market Theatre,
          where for years Athol Fugard and other playwrights had defied
          government censors and depicted the agony of apartheid. (234)

          I despise terrorism and the nihilism it represents. (522)

On the one hand, an apologist can claim that Clinton has to say such things.  Is she going to call Mubarak a “bloodthirsty tyrant, addicted to power” and cause an international ruckus with an American ally?  Of course not.  So instead she uses the language of diplomacy – damning with faint praise.  But there is more here than that, I think.  Being the First Lady of the American nation is so multifaceted that she has to have interactions over a vast expanse of human experience – the vestiges of Japanese imperialism, an Egyptian strongman and his wife, South African apartheid, and global terrorism are but the slightest of beginnings.  For an individual to cover such an expanse of territory requires either astonishing brilliance or a superhuman tolerance for superficial engagement.  Clinton does not show the former.
       I will inject one further reflection.  There have been many examples of astonishing brilliance in human history, and in most instances, the brilliance has (ironically) been the result of a deep steeping in fundamentals: so a traveller like Charles Doughty, who spent two years Herodotus-like travelling through the deserts of Arabia, produced insight after insight into the Arab life because of his knowledge of basic things: geology and botany to understand the harsh human economy of Arabia; medicine to understand the effect of desert life on the men of Arabia; ancient and medieval history to understand the social structures of Arabia; and the Quran to understand the aspirations of poetry of the Arabs.  This was the old British Imperial education, and we need look no further to see what made them great imperialists.  But the number who receive such an education today is not great, and specialization has produced the superficiality we are accustomed to: economy without ecology, history without ancient history, sociology without religion.  What is more, those old educated people, who might do excellently in positions of public symbolism such as First Lady, do not typically do well in electoral politics.  This is perhaps the main thrust of the crisis of leadership to be found in all the great-power democracies.
       There is an interesting moment in the book which particularly seemed to embody this problem.  Clinton was hosting Chinese President Jiang Zemin when she decided to engage in the following conversation:

          I had met with the Dalai Lama to discuss the Tibetans’ plight, and so
          I asked President Jiang to explain China’s repression of the Tibetans and
          their religion.
            “What do you mean?” he said.  “Tibet has historically been a part of
          China.  The Chinese are the liberators of the Tibetan people.  I have read
          the histories in our libraries, and I know the Tibetans are better off now
          than they were before.”
            “But what about their traditions and the right to practice their religion
          as they choose?”
            He became passionate, even banging the table once.  “They were
          victims of religion.  They are now freed from feudalism.”
            Despite a developing global culture, the same facts can be and often
          are viewed through starkly different historical and cultural prisms and
          the word “freedom” is defined to fit one’s political perspective.  Still,
          I didn’t think Jiang, who is quite sophisticated and had succeeded in
          opening up and modernizing the Chinese economy, was being quite
          straight with me on Tibet.  The Chinese, for historical and psychological
          reasons, were obsessed with avoiding internal disintegration.  In the
          case of Tibet, that led to overreaction and oppression, as obsessions
          often do. (458)

I was struck by this passage because recent reading of my own in the topic of botany has exposed me to travel narratives of European plant collectors in the Himalayas, who are united in their pity for the people of Tibet and their horror at the savagery, ruthlessness, and barbarism of the rule of the Lamas.  It was a different side of the story than the one you get from Richard Gere, but it was not a perspective produced for distribution by the Chinese government.  It was ancillary to the books I was reading, but it was there.  These “histories” which Jiang was reading probably reflect the same reality, and I have no doubt that Clinton had not read them.  And this may be part of the reason why Clinton comes off as the weaker party here: less well-informed, less voluble, less passionate; to call her psychologizing of Jiang (and the entire Chinese nation!) smug is a vast understatement.
       That smugness continues into the next paragraph, where almost instinctually Clinton launches into a defense of such encounters:

          During our visit to China, Bill and I again raised our concerns about
          Tibet and the general state of human rights in China.  Predictably,
          the Chinese leaders were adamant and dismissive.  When I’m asked
          why a U.S. President should visit any country with whom we have
          such serious differences, my answer is always the same: America,
          the most diverse nation in human history, now wields unparalleled
          power.  But we can be quite insular and uninformed about other
          countries and their perspectives.  Our leaders and our people benefit
          from learning more about the world in which we live, compete, and
          try to cooperate. (458)

But to me, she seemed to be an example of that insularity and uninformedness.  What did she learn?  She says that the Chinese acted “predictably” and she accuses Jiang of dishonesty.   She does not seem to have in herself the capacity to understand others which she claims is the goal of such encounters.  The Chinese were proud of “modernizing” Tibet and “liberating” it from a theocracy.  Does this not align itself with the American agenda in the Middle East?  Make no mistake – I am not a fan of Chinese imperialism.  But it seems to me that there is material for philosophical reflection here.   But this reflection simply is not found in Clinton. 
        Sophistication seems particularly lacking when it comes to political opponents.  One can look in vain for a sympathetic portrait of a Republican.  There is almost no intellectual confrontation – giving one’s opponents a voice, understanding their concerns, and then countering their ideas.  Clinton admits that she had no respect for the Office of Independent Counsel whose investigations became the Impeachment Trial.

          Although I worked on my testimony, which was simple and straight-
          forward, I was more focused on how to control my anger at the whole
          process.  The grand jurors were performing their duties as citizens.  They
          deserved my respect, even if the lawyers working for Starr did not. (335)

They did not even deserve her respect?  That is quite a statement.  Of course she did not like what they were doing – but are they beneath respect?  Or is this merely Clinton being “insular and uninformed” about other people’s “perspectives”?  Indeed, on this point (the Starr investigations which led to President Clinton’s impeachment) Clinton shows an impressively partisan perspective: her side represents America, her opponents only something evil.

          All but two of the twenty-three grand jurors were in attendance – ten
          were women, and most were African American.  They seemed entirely
          representative of the district where they served.  Each of Ken Starr’s
          eight male deputies looked just like him. (335)

Perhaps they were, however, representative of another part of America, which also exists.  Is there really a problem with either an entirely black set of lawyers or an entirely white set of lawyers?  Are not both acceptable in this country? 

         When we learned that Bill had won the election by a solid eight
         percentage points, I felt it was more than a victory for the President:
         it was a vindication of the American people. (379)

Forty-four percent of the voters who voted for Clinton represent the American people; but what about the majority who wanted someone else, either Bob Dole or Ross Perot?
       Not only does she deny her political opponents any voice or any dignity, but she often puts the conflict in exaggerated terms, often involving violence:  
  
          As I prepared to enter the grand jury room, I waved at my hard-working
          lawyers and said, “Cheerio!  Off to the firing squad!” (335)

          It was a challenge to forgive Bill; the prospects of forgiving the hired
          guns of the right wing seemed beyond me.  If Mandela could forgive,
          I would try. (480)

Mandela was imprisoned for twenty-seven years.  His people had no political rights, and his political organization was violently suppressed.  He forgives his captors – and Hillary Clinton is unable to forgive the Republicans for exploiting her husband’s personal weaknesses (and illegal lying to cover them up) to score political points against him?  Perhaps this would be intelligible if Clinton herself was a person incapable of doing such a thing, and she is astonished by such perfidy in others.  But there is no evidence of that: her discussion of Newt Gingrich in this account seems small-minded at least and unprincipled at best:

           After a long discussion at our dinner table about NATO expansion,
           Bosnia, and Iraq, Gingrich leaned in my direction.  “These accusations
           against your husband are ludicrous,” he said.  “And I think it’s terribly
           unfair the way some people are trying to make something out of it.
           Even if it were true, it’s meaningless.  It’s not going anywhere.”  That
           was what I had hoped to hear, but I was surprised.  I later reported to Bill
           and David Kendall that Gingrich seemed to believe that the allegations
           against Bill were not serious.  He completely changed his tune when he
           led the Republican charge for Bill’s impeachment.  For the moment,
           though, I took this conversation as evidence that Gingrich was more
           complicated and unpredictable than I had thought.  (Months later, when
           his own marital infidelities were exposed, I better understood why
           Gingrich may have wanted to dismiss the issue.) (450)

Later she thanks a friend by name for her help, noting that she too “had had her own experience with the agony of infidelity.”  Was that necessary?
       I have a few other observations on the political style that Clinton uses.  It should be very familiar to us by now, but I have not often heard it analyzed.  The logic of many of the book’s sentences is pure politico-speak, a kind of illogical empathetic zeugma of platitudes: “Because one in eight women in our country is expected to develop breast cancer, early detection is essential” (292).  We are all used to such sentences on the campaign trail.  But on a page, you can see how the two clauses have no logical relationship with each other.  The prevalence of a medical condition has no effect on the need for early detection: “Since one in eight women will develop dandruff, early detection is essential.”  But in the end, you learn to read past the analytical reflex or simply stop reading.
       There is also a strong pattern of prolepsis – adding words which prejudice or preclude the argument before it is even started.  Describing her husband’s infidelities, she writes, “I believed he ought to be held accountable for his behavior – by me and by Chelsea – not by a misuse of the impeachment process” (474).  “Not by the impeachment process” would have done just fine.  To be held accountable by a misuse of anything would be – well, a misuse.  The added words are there only to increase the moral temperature. 
       Another aspect of the political speak is the insertion of random bits of folksy wisdom, harvested from who knows where.  I respect this when it is very apt and shrewd, and when you feel that the speaker is handing them down from his predecessors in an organic tradition.  But Clinton’s use of such folk wisdom is utterly contrived:

          It reminded me of an old saying from Sunday school: Faith is like stepping
          off a cliff and expecting one of two outcomes – you will either land on
          solid ground or you will be taught to fly. (494)

Is faith really like that?  Is this a meaningful dichotomy?  Does this saying really mean something to her?  No, no, and probably no.
       Probably the most lovingly described parts of the book, interestingly, are the trips abroad.  Here Clinton appears to be actually excited; and the way we can tell this is that she actually notices details.

          Word of my visit had spread through the villages of Gujarat, and
          nearly one thousand women flocked to the meeting, some of them walking
          nine or ten hours along hot, dusty paths through the countryside.  Tears
          filled my eyes when I saw them waiting for me under a large tent.
          Fanning themselves in their sapphire-, emerald-, and ruby-colored saris,
          they looked like an undulating human rainbow.  They were Muslim and
          Hindu, including untouchables, the lowest Hindu caste.  There were kite
          makers, scrap pickers and vegetable vendors, and Chelsea sat down
          among them.  (280)

She also records that women in this area were having some success overcoming the domineering influence of their mothers-in-law, which I found interesting. (The almost Biblical language with Chelsea is probably just inadvertent, the kind of thing that happens when a set of interviews is written up by a bunch of hacks.)
       You may say what you wish about the fact that this is the kind of setting where Hillary seemed most comfortable: as an American First Lady travelling through the Third World, she was royalty and was treated that way.  She seems to have enjoyed this role.  But on the other hand, she seems to find their Third World problems more immediate and more morally clear than those she encountered in America – as, no doubt, they are – and she seems to take genuine intellectual and emotional interest in them.  One of the themes of these travels is that women should have their own voice and not be silent in their societies:

          I wasn’t the only one moved by the village women.  One of the American
          journalists who stood near me, listening to our discussion, leaned in and
          whispered, “Silence is not spoken here.” (286) 

There are also some personal qualities that come through in the book.  I was very struck by her relationship with Chelsea, which to me seemed bizarrely clutchy and almost oppressive. 

          By mid-September, the occasion I had dreaded for years finally arrived:
          Chelsea was moving to California to start her freshman year at Stanford. (419)

This may merely be my lack of understanding of motherhood, or it may be manipulation by Clinton of the cultural concept of baby boomer motherhood.  But is it really a virtue, or even an acceptable vice, to dread the day your child goes off to college?  Would she not want Chelsea to be a free and independent woman?  Again, I may here be merely a lowly novice confronting the great mystery of motherhood.
       I will close with one final tidbit that struck me.  During the Lewinsky scandal, she notes, “my own approval rating was nearing an all-time high and would eventually peak somewhere around 70 percent, proving that the American people are fundamentally fair and sympathetic.”  I’m not certain it proves that, but it does prove that Mrs. Clinton kept track of such statistics and that this one made it into her psyche somehow.  It serves as an emblem of the superficiality of the politics and “living history” Clinton represents – the digital superficiality of the approve/disapprove dichotomy, and the curious fact that there could be a person who would not only track these things, but somehow take a perverse joy in them, and set them down in her memoir as a kind of personal vindication.  When our era becomes merely history and no longer alive, I have no doubt that historians will talk about overcoming this kind of politics and this kind of person as one of the great challenges of our era – and to the results of this confrontation they will trace either our subsequent success or eventual failure.
 

 

The McCain campaign?

16-Oct-08

http://andrewsullivan.theatlantic.com/the_daily_dish/2008/10/no-mudslinging.html

It’s an Archetypal Life

16-Oct-08

Is it just me, or has John McCain morphed into Mr. Potter?  “A warped, frustrated old man,” prattling on about how wealth has to come down from the top.  Closed, grasping, acquisitive, trapped in his own self and his own desire for more for himself.  And Obama is becoming our George Bailey – the defender of the little guy, the community figure, the hero – “Just remember one thing, Mr. Potter, that this rabble you’re talking about, they do most of the living and paying and working and dying in this community.  Is it too much to ask that they work and pay and live and die in a couple of decent rooms and a bath?”  The physical appearance of the two men is combining with their ideologies to create something cosmic and archetypal.  Of course it is easy to be deceived by such appearances – but almost impossible not to hope that they have a deep significance for our world.  People have been making fun of the messianic character of the Obama campaign, but the feeling is there, as irrational as it may be.  Kennedy and Reagan had it too, of course.  This power goes beyond individual accomplisments.  In fact, it goes beyond all individualism.  Communities need leaders and symbolic men.

Final Presidential Debate Reaction.

16-Oct-08

        This was the first debate I watched on television – I took a trip to the Boiceville Inn, which has a t.v. room for movies and television events.  I don’t know if McCain looked like this before, but his appearance was terrible: he looked uncomfortable, angry, and frustrated.  He looked like he had come with a gameplan for the wrong game, but he stayed with it, useless as it was.  He leveled charges that he had no time to explain the significance of – if they really have any significance – while Obama could clearly and eloquently defend himself against them.  On issues, Obama offered much more detail and substance and showed much greater command and confidence.  I was in a biased crowd, but even with Obama’s cool demeanor he gave sixty-second summaries of important national concerns which raised applause in the crowd.  McCain has said before that we need a “steady hand.”  If this is the criterion McCain thinks we should use, Obama clearly should be our next president.

        God, what ice Obama has in his veins!  Through three debates he has stuck with his plan: block punches but land very few, stay calm, don’t go on the attack.  When given the opportunity to contrast Biden and Palin, he didn’t even mention Palin – he’ll let us form our own opinion, without stooping to attack her.  It takes such marvellous self-discipline.  A presidential performance – Obama has a kind of regal energy coming from self-knowledge that it is hard not to admire.

Sancte Eustachi, ora pro nobis.

16-Oct-08

The Cursed Homiletic “We”

13-Oct-08

       Everyone agrees that modern homilies are terrible.  Nor has it changed much in recent history – C.S. Lewis, who otherwise seemed a rather contented Christian, talks about how insufferable the homilies were in the Anglican Church.  Catholics often envy even the terrible homilies the Anglicans have.
       I cannot say how many times I have left church in the middle of a homily, though it certainly is fewer times than I have wanted to.  When I get to the twentieth minute without hearing anything of significance I consider myself justified in leaving.  Nor am I alone.  I know other Catholics who go through a family debate every time they want to go to church.  “So, what do you think about going to church?  I’d like to.”  “Do you think you can put up with Father so-and-so’s telling you about his visit to his shrink for a half-hour?”  “God, you’re right, forget about it.”  I’ll bet a pope could double church attendance by mandating sixty-second sermons.
       That won’t happen soon – the priestly hierarchy still feels it needs some power it can abuse – so let me offer at least one improvement.  Let’s abolish the accursed homiletic “we.”
       I don’t know who came up with the homiletic “we”; all I know is that it has become a universal feature of mainline-Church preaching.  It may even be taught in “homiletics” at the seminary.  All the priests seem to do it.  I define the homiletic we the use of the first-person pronoun to describe a state of sinfulness which is supposedly normative but really, in the preacher’s eyes, should be corrected.  You hear it all the time: “We get caught up in our daily lives and don’t think about God.”  “We think Christmas is just gifts and wreaths and Santy Claus.”  “We say to ourselves, ‘God won’t mind if I do this one little thing.’”  “We like to go to church and sing all the hymns but we don’t get involved in Gospel issues like poverty and social justice.”
       You can see one of the major problems with the homiletic we.  Often it’s not sincere.  The “we” in this context does not include the speaker.  The priest does not himself think that Christmas is all about Santa Claus.  His use of the first-person pronoun is a pose.  Really what he means by “we” is “you stupid unserious people, you sheeple in the pews.”  He’s saying what he thinks you do or you think, and he’s going to try to correct it.
       So his inclusion of himself is usually disingenuous.  Sometimes, of course, it’s sincere.  I remember one time when a priest I would consider bitter and judgemental said in his homily, “Too often, we’re bitter and judgemental,” and I felt he was in fact confessing something he knew was a real weakness.  I can respect that to some extent.  But I’m not certain he really needed to include other people in his confession.
       That’s the other sin of the homiletic we: besides the fact that it is usually a lie, it is also often libelous.  I presume that when someone uses the word ‘we’ in church, that we is probably supposed to include me as well.  But in fact people vary greatly as to their sins.  And so when I hear priests saying, for example, “We don’t want to make sacrifices for our religion,” I think to myself. “That’s not true.  I do.”  When he says, “We think Easter is about dressing up and getting together with family,” I say, “no I don’t.”
       One of these days I’m going to start vocalizing these responses.  But first I figure I have to give fair warning.  If you agree with me, share your distaste with a preacher.  Maybe if they become aware of how condescending this practice is, they’ll actually stop it.

The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini

12-Oct-08

       Readers who seek some profound insight into the nature of Afghanistan will probably be disappointed by reading The Kite Runner, a modern novel by Khaled Hosseini.  But the book is a very useful document for exploring the values of the liberal upper class, which one presumes is in large part an American/West-European phenomenon, although I am prepared to admit that perhaps the upper class of every nation today thinks the same way.
       The novel follows a wealthy Afghani family who move from Afghanistan to America following the Russian invasion in the late 1970s.  The viewpoint of the narrator is December 2001.  Afghanistan in those decades was the theater of continual war, at first brought on by a communist invasion, then turning into a civil war won by Islamic fundamentalists.  The American invasion does not form a part of the novel.  But those two ideologies – communism and Islamic fundamentalism – and their effects on human minds are some of the most interesting and important phenomena of our lifetimes, and there is little doubt that this setting is one of the things which makes people pick up this book.
       One of the book’s little moral lessons is that some people are evil and must be stopped by the good people.  This is hardly profound, but on some level it is worth proving and it provides a good place to start talking about the book.  This is the moral lesson passage, which gives a sense of Hosseini’s simple and generally disappointing style:
          That’s right.  Your father [who believed that “it’s wrong to hurt even bad
          people”] was a good man.  But that’s what I’m trying to tell you, Sohrab
          jan.  That there are bad people in this world, and sometimes bad people
          stay bad.  Sometimes you have to stand up to them. (319)

(The simple style is in part produced by the plot, which is mostly about children.  But it’s clear even from this single excerpt that real developed thoughts are not an element in this book.)
       An interesting question then arises: what do these “bad people” look like?  For surely, now that we know they exist, it would be good to be able to identify them.  What do they do?  How do they think?  What does “standing up to them” mean?  The key adventure in this book is the return of the protagonist Amir to Kabul during the reign of the Taliban.  There he sees a public stoning in the football stadium, and has to meet with the executioner, who strangely is wearing “dark round sunglasses like the ones John Lennon wore” (271).  This is a very strange fashion statement for the Taliban, and our key to understanding exactly what Mr. Hosseini is up to.
       Hosseini decides to make this executioner a character, and so of course we are interested to know what sort of person becomes an executioner for the Taliban.  As simply had to happen, the protagonist knew him when they were children.  Of course, he was a weird sadistic bully.  He was also a sexual deviant, raping, at the age of twelve or so, the protagonist’s best friend.  So what does this radical muslim, this powerful leader in the Taliban look like?  Well, here he is, at a party, not long after the rape scene:
  
          He extended a wrapped birthday gift to me.  “Happy birthday.”
          He was dressed in a cotton shirt and blue slacks, a red silk tie and shiny
          black loafers.  He smelled of cologne and his blond hair was neatly
          combed back.  On the surface, he was the embodiment of every parent’s
          dream, a strong, tall, well-dressed and well-mannered boy with talent
          and striking looks, not to mention the wit to joke with an adult. (96-7)

 So there he is, your average Taliban executioner, with blond hair and blue slacks, in loafers.  Of course – he wore those John Lennon sunglasses in order to conceal his blue eyes!  (I’m not making this up.  See page 281.)
       He is the only member of the Taliban, and indeed the only Taliban sympathizer, who is so much as given a name in this book.  And he just happens to be an Aryan white supremacist.  His mother was – pause for dramatic music – a German!  And the gift he gave the protagonist, well, you know what it was, the book all the Taliban read – “a biography of Hitler.”  When, during the climactic confrontation, he is offered a bribe – which, one would imagine, is a pretty good way to get what you want in a country where the people really were incredibly poor, and one which did in fact work with most members of the Taliban, who were desperate for money – he retorts,

          “Money?”  Assef said.  He tittered.  “Have you ever heard of
          Rockingham?  Western Australia, a slice of heaven.  You should see it,
          miles and miles of beach.  Green water, blue skies.  My parents live there,
          in a beachfront villa.  There’s a golf course behind the villa and a little
          lake.  Father plays golf every day.  Mother, she prefers tennis – Father
          says she has a wicked backhand.  They own an Afghan restaurant and two
          jewelry stores; both businesses are doing spectacularly.”  He plucked a
          red grape.  Put it, lovingly, in Sohrab’s mouth [his homosexual boy lover].
          “So if I need money, I’ll have them wire it to me.”  He kissed the side of
          Sohrab’s neck. (282)

I would pass over all this as merely absurd if it were not so current – this book has been lauded to the skies, and truly terrible writing like this has not stopped it from selling millions of copies – and so revealing.  The face of evil is a combination of Nazi and country-club WASP.  The face of evil is wealthy, effortlessly wealthy, so wealthy it isn’t even greedy anymore.  (Greed, by the way, is generally good according to this worldview, so it has to be effortless wealth which is offensive, not greed).  That evil should look this way is apparently so necessary to a certain sort of person that it was required to insert it here, in a Taliban executioner, in Afghanistan, where it is really – please, let’s be honest – completely inappropriate.  Now I will not deny that there were some Westerners – but how many?  A dozen in a country of millions? – who showed up in the Taliban, and also some people who swore off wealth, especially from Saudi Arabia.  But our intelligence agencies found places like Afghanistan notoriously difficult to infiltrate, because of the value placed on family, blood ties, and race when it came to getting real power.  A half-breed German with blond hair and a family in Australia would, to the Taliban, have been useful for recording propaganda in English but not much more.
       Of course, this is only a novel, but plausibility is an element in a novel, and this really is too much.  And as I said, it is revealing.  As far as I can tell, one of the key elements in modern liberalism is the reservation of moral autonomy for Westerners only.  Westerners alone, and especially rich Westerners, are capable of good and evil; everyone else is a victim.  Consequently when these victims do something bad, it is merely a reaction, and a justifiable one, to the evil of the rich Westerners.  How can you blame them?  I once lamented to a friend about the environmental degradation on an American Indian reservation – the litter, the rusty cars scattered about, etc. – he replied, “You have no right to criticize them, after what this country’s put them through.”  If you agree with that statement, congratulations, you’re a liberal.  I am not against sympathy.  But exempting people from moral standards is also depriving them of full humanity: there charity dissolves into condescension.
       The consequence of this worldview, however, is that it simply was not possible, given the apparent constraints of the novel, for Hosseini to make an evil person who was not white and rich.  I do not know where these constraints came from – from Hosseini himself, from his editor, from a desire to market to a particular book-purchasing niche – but it is clear that anyone reading the book will not get any perspective other than that of the rich modern liberal.  One of the characters in the story, the protagonist’s father who is not allowed to be especially bright, hates Jimmy Carter and

          When Reagan went on TV and called the Shorawi (the USSR) “the
          Evil Empire,” Baba went out and bought a picture of the grinning
          president giving a thumbs up.  He framed the picture and hung it in our
          hallway, nailing it right next to the old black-and-white of himself in
          his thin necktie shaking hands with King Zahir Shah.  Most of our
          neighbors in Fremont were bus drivers, policemen, gas station
          attendants, and unwed mothers collecting welfare, exactly the sort of
          blue-collar people who would soon suffocate under the pillow
          Reaganomics pressed to their faces.  Baba was the one lone Republican
          in our building. (126)

The metaphor is really quite striking – the pillow to the face.  It feels especially strong coming from an Afghani refugee.  Does Reaganomics really look that bad to someone from Kabul?  Especially when that person (I am talking about the protagonist here) came to the U.S. as a child, watched his father pump gas for a living, but then went on (according to the story) to become a professional novelist and own a large Victorian home in San Francisco?  I will say that I myself have a somewhat similar story, in that my family was poor and on food stamps at the beginning of the Reagan administration, but off them by the end, and now is quite prosperous.  Neither this novel nor my own life has indicated to me that living in America is like having a pillow to one’s face.  But in this novel, where it is not necessary, this statement seems to serve merely as a chunk of undigested propaganda (with the usual liberal “my embarrassing Daddy is a conservative” dynamic) inserted in order to confirm the reader in his presumed opinions.
       The novel’s world-view is also on display in another of the book’s moral teachings.  We are told that all sin is theft – murder is theft, meanness is theft, etc.

          “When you kill a man, you steal a life,” Baba said.  “You steal a wife’s
          right to a husband, rob his children of a father.  When you tell a lie,
          you steal someone’s right to the truth.  When you cheat, you steal the
          right to fairness.  Do you see?” (18)

If you agree with this, again, congratulations, you are a liberal.  But is there really any cosmic significance in this teaching?  What is a “right to a husband”?  Could you really sue a virus for violating your rights if your husband dies?  Will legal terminology really help us understand the universe?  And what exactly is the “right to fairness” anyway?  Can I invoke that when I see someone else’s novel selling well while mine sells poorly?  Or when women prefer other men to me?
       Of course we know that people believe these things.  The surprising part is seeing this sort of viewpoint coming out of Afghanistan.  It makes you wonder if the book is merely manufactured to play to the prejudices of Western liberals, or if it might be true that in fact everyone really thinks exactly like rich Americans.
       While we are on this, we may as well discuss Islam, which is not one of the book’s focuses but is a controversial topic in the world and undoubtedly one of the causes of interest in this book.  In the Kabul soccer stadium, the stoning of adulterers is preceded by a little speech.  It’s worth quoting it in full, I suppose:

          When the prayer was done, the cleric cleared his throat.  “Brothers and
          sisters!” he called, speaking in Farsi, his voice booming through the
          stadium.  “We are here today to carry out Shari’a.  We are here today to
          carry out justice.  We are here today because the will of Allah and word
          of the Prophet Muhammed, peace be upon him, are alive and well here
          in Afghanistan, our beloved homeland.  We listen to what God says and
          we obey because we are nothing but humble, powerless creatures before
          God’s greatness.  And what does God say?  I ask you!  WHAT DOES
          GOD SAY?  God says that every sinner must be punished in a manner
          befitting his sin.  Those are not my words, nor the words of my brothers.
          Those are the words of GOD!”  He pointed his free hand to the sky.  My
          head was pounding and the sun felt much too hot.
           “Every sinner must be punished in a manner befitting his sin!” the cleric
          repeated into the mike, lowering his voice, enunciating each word slowly,
          dramatically.  “And what manner of punishment, brothers and sisters,
          befits the adulterer?  How shall we deal with those who spit in the face
          of God?  How shall we answer those who throw stones at the windows
          of God’s house?  WE SHALL THROW THE STONES BACK!”  He shut
          off the microphone.  A low-pitched murmur spread through the crowd.
                                                                                                          (270-1)
Now I do not know much about Afghan rhetoric, but based on how Western the rest of the book seems, it does seem a little strange that the above speech can be spoken in a baptist-preacher accent, be it a white preacher or a black one, and every cadence will fit.  The multiple anaphora at the beginning, the yelling of certain phrases, the pointing to the sky – all of it is traditional American Gospel style.  That is one suspicious fact.  But beyond that, the crowd is represented as distinctly disinterested and innocent.  There are numerous rhetorical questions, all of which go unanswered by the passive crowd.  Needless to say, this oversimplifies the problem of the popularity of Sharia law and totalitarian Islam in Afghanistan and the world at large.
       But even better is what comes next:

          “Next to me, Farid was shaking his head.  ‘And they call themselves
          Muslims,’ he whispered.” (271)

This is quite a fashionable thing, to say, “That’s not Islam.  Killing people is not Islam.”  Well then, one may ask, what is Islam?  There is no answer to that question in the book – in fact, the protagonists viewpoint is that of an atheist/agnostic (why are we not surprised?) – but how then do we know that publicly executing adulterers is not Islam?  (Unless Farid is more upset about the weak Gospel-style rhetoric the cleric was using.)  Of course the term “Islam” can be used to describe fourteen centuries of human activity in a large part of the world, so defining it is not easy.  Perhaps we should return to the term Muhammedanism (or Mahometanism).  Muslims themselves have not shown any comfort with this term, because it implies that following the example of Muhammed and being a muslim could be different.  But I will explain its usefulness. 
       The West hopes that Islam is compatible with certain contemporary Western practices, such as democracy, or equal legal rights for men and women, or tolerance of homosexuality.  The obstacle is the following: Islam defines itself as the religion of Muhammed; Islamic scholars have documented the life of Muhammed very satisfactorily according to their own standards; and in those documents Muhammed dealt explicitly with questions such as democracy, equal rights for men and women, or tolerance of homosexuality.  He is opposed to them all.  Christians have the term “What would Jesus do?”  For Muslims, the question is, “What did Muhammed do?”  He held public executions of adulterers.  Consequently every nation that claims to be organized according to Islamic law – Muhammedan law – does the same.  I believe that these nations have a good title to being called muslim nations.  If you oppose the practice of these nations, then you should oppose Islam, or work to create a distinction in the world’s thought between an Islam which is potentially compatible with things like equal rights for women, and Muhammedanism, which is not.
       Forgive me for going off on such a digression, but one of the reasons for the popularity of this book is the “war of ideas” between the West and groups like the Taliban.  Unfortunately, this debate has still not gotten past its definitions.  We are still trying to figure out what Islam means.  It seems that whenever a person tries to define himself explicitly and uniquely as a muslim (as opposed to a muslim-American, or French muslim, or muslim intellectual, or anything else), there is someone else nearby to say, “He is not a muslim.  That is not Islam.”  Eventually, we will tire of this game.  This is the Hosseini game.  “The Taliban?  Don’t worry, they weren’t muslims.  Don’t worry about the fact that they said they were muslims.  They weren’t.”  What would he say about Muhammed publicly beheading nine hundred Jews in the main square of Mecca (which no traditional Muslim scholar would deny)?  Would he shake his head and say, “And he calls himself a Muslim.” 
       But while we are on this, let us finish our picture of modern liberalism.  We have mentioned that the viewpoint of the book is that of an atheist/agnostic.  Let us look at this phenomenon.  His father seems to be a materialist of sorts:
 
          One of the refugees asked Baba why he wasn’t joining them [in
          prayer].  “God is going to save us all.  Why don’t you pray to him?”
          Baba snorted a pinch of snuff.  Stretched his legs.  “What’ll save us is
          eight cylinders and a good carburetor.”  That silenced the rest of them
          for good about the matter of God. (120).

The protagonist himself, however, is incapable of such bold talk.  Rather, he is capable of prayer when he needs something: “Caught between Baba and the mullahs at school [who were religious, of course], I still hadn’t made up my mind about God.  But when a Koran ayat I had learned in my diniyat class rose to my lips, I muttered it” (62). 
       All this is fairly standard liberal novel fare.  People pray when they need things.  The protagonist is not quite an atheist, because he is weak.  But there is at least one strong character who doesn’t “need” God (the basic liberal conception of why people have a conception of God) whom the protagonist admires.  Atheists are upright, strong, and heroic.  What about religious people?  Well, there really is only one person, besides the peasants who are blessed with the ignorance of their social position (but who don’t really care about “organized religion”), who would seem to be religious: the members of the Taliban.  But of course, the one Taliban character is pure evil.  More than that, he is preeminently a hypocrite.  Besides stoning adulterers, his main activity is raping children, especially boys.  He visits the local orphanage monthly for his prey.  Now it is true that the guilt which many people feel as a result of doing things they believe are wrong can be expressed as religious energy, and so the worse a person’s character, sometimes the more vehemently they cling to and profess their religion.  This is the root of much religious hypocrisy, which is admittedly a perennial element of religion.  But this is the boy Hosseini has his Taliban leader accompanied by a boy of the following description:

          His head was shaved, his eyes darkened with mascara, and his cheeks
          glowed with an unnatural red.  When he stopped in the middle of the
          room, the bells strapped around his anklets stopped jingling. (279)

This is, I am afraid, something of a liberal fantasy.  There can be no question of religious sincerity.  Religion is merely a show designed by “religious” leaders who are busy pursuing the goods of liberalism: money, power, and (especially kinky) sexual pleasure. 
       Human beings are human beings, and money, power, and pleasure will sway them all, but there is more to life than such things, and the religious impulse in human beings is often precisely the attempt to transcend these things.  Literature may also contain such possibilities.  But a book like The Kite Runner represents the opposite tendency: it is designed to pander to the preconceptions of its audience.  It produces good feelings in its target audience: its popularity attests to that.  But for people of another sort, acquaintance with the book is liable to call into question the whole project of merely pleasing books, whose value is purely in dollars and cents and so many hours of an otherwise bitter life diverted.